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A Rhyme….totally senseless
Published on June 15, 2006 By foreverserenity In Poetry

Father
Mother
Sister
Brother

What are you?
If neither of those be

Daughter
Son
Nephew
Niece

None of these?

Would you an in-law be?
Or do you not identify with anything

Friend

Or

Foe

What line do you tow?

Does it really matter
Or do you really care
If you are but other

Ah my nonsense rhyme is at an end
I have no more words to pen
What the frig is wrong with thee?
Off to bed you ought to be

The end!


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Comments
on Jun 15, 2006
This is cute
on Jun 15, 2006
Reply By: Buddah MoskowitzPosted: Thursday, June 15, 2006This is cute


Thank you Mr. Moskowitz!



Reply By: little-whipPosted: Thursday, June 15, 2006


Glad you liked my nonsense!
on Jun 16, 2006
Dr. Seuss I presume

I liked this FS
on Jun 16, 2006
Reply By: KellyW.Posted: Friday, June 16, 2006Dr. Seuss I presume I liked this FS


Thanks Kelly! I didn't have him in mind when I penned this but you're right!
on Jun 16, 2006
I could be talking "absolute nonsense", but I liked it.
on Jun 18, 2006
Nothing at all senseless about this, Serenity. It could be song lyrics, you know. I like 'friend or foe, what line do you tow?' Could be the chorus.

Sometimes the best things are the simplest...
on Jun 19, 2006
Reply By: uDigItTheMostPosted: Friday, June 16, 2006I could be talking "absolute nonsense", but I liked it.


Hhehee, nice Chris!


Reply By: dynamasoPosted: Sunday, June 18, 2006Nothing at all senseless about this, Serenity. It could be song lyrics, you know. I like 'friend or foe, what line do you tow?' Could be the chorus.Sometimes the best things are the simplest...


You're right Maso...could be lyrics to a song! I was just senselessly tired when I wrote this!! Glad you like it!