Disperse those darkening clouds,
That shroud your heart and mind.
And from the desolate bottom,
To the skies you must climb.



I just made that up. You inspired me.

Nice poem, I like the ones that aren't all dark and dreary...I've written a lot of those.

~Zoo

Disperse those darkening clouds,That shroud your heart and mind.And from the desolate bottom,To the skies you must climb.

I love it! Nice Shaun, I know you're a fab writer! Give us some more. [ps, I had a mad day today and promise to come visit your blog asap!]

I know you're a fab writer! Give us some more.

Hah...I'm a lazy writer. Especially when it comes to schoolwork...but I'm not too shabby if I do say so myself.

~Zoo

Lift yourself high so high that you can see the mountain top to reach for that star that shines within

I always say that in every work of art there is something special or unique, a new way of seeing something, that makes it stand out - that knocks it out of the park, so to speak. This was that section for me. Great job.

I always say that in every work of art there is something special or unique, a new way of seeing something, that makes it stand out - that knocks it out of the park, so to speak. This was that section for me. Great job.

Great! So glad you appreciated it! Thx Mr. Moskowitz!

but I'm not too shabby if I do say so myself.

No you're not (too shabby)! (re-edited for clarity! I suddenly realise my last respond didn't sound like it was a compliment and it was!)