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Published on September 2, 2006 By foreverserenity In Poetry

There he is

that tall drink of water

his voice

smooth

each word awakens in me

like molten fire


those eyes

oh how I could swim in them

to find the place

that is his heart

his center


my brain hurts

trying to wrap our bodies together

oh the things he could do to me


I remember

those hands, long, tapered fingers

large hands that makes me wonder if….

yes if…..


I scan his body

that firm, taut mass of muscles

as he moves

ever

so…

“oh…...”

my heart goes pitter patter

p-i-t-t-e-r p-a-t-t-e-r


his eyes seeks mine

and I smile at him

he’s mine

Comments
on Sep 03, 2006
I love the images, Donna. Another great poem. You're making me want to go and play my guitar and see if I can't get another song or two written . . .
on Sep 03, 2006
Reply By: San ChoninoPosted: Sunday, September 03, 2006I love the images, Donna. Another great poem. You're making me want to go and play my guitar and see if I can't get another song or two written . .


Aw, that's sweet of you to say Braenden! Great, go on, do it!
on Sep 03, 2006

Ohooohhh I like this serenity!  Thank you for sharing it!    It reminds me of my first husband....

on Sep 04, 2006
Ohooohhh I like this serenity! Thank you for sharing it! It reminds me of my first husband....


You're welcome Trudy! I actually wrote this thinking of my first very serious crush, then it rolled into my last and most recent one, my hubby!!
on Sep 04, 2006
Those first two lines make me put this whole poem in a southern drawl.

It's very good, even though it goes on about a guy, which frankly doesn't interest me that much.

~Zoo
on Sep 04, 2006
Those first two lines make me put this whole poem in a southern drawl. It's very good, even though it goes on about a guy, which frankly doesn't interest me that much.


Hahaha, thx Shaun!!
on Sep 04, 2006
You set my heart racing, i could feel what you felt!
on Sep 05, 2006
I always find it interesting to hear what women find attractive about men. very well written. thanks for being honest about hand size. I think most women say it doesn't matter, but I tend to distrust this.
on Sep 05, 2006
You set my heart racing, i could feel what you felt!


Wow, that's great Jen! It had me tingling just remembering!



I always find it interesting to hear what women find attractive about men. very well written. thanks for being honest about hand size. I think most women say it doesn't matter, but I tend to distrust this.


Well, some say not, but it's true for most! ! Glad you liked it Mr. Moskowitz!